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Monday 15 October 2012

Olympic argument

Olympic Argument
 
Mr Hendriks, I want to go to London because I would like to travel around the world.


Reason 1: I should go to the olympics because when I go I can do something good to help you in the future. I can pay for you to go to the 20000 olympics.


Reason 2: I will work harder at school.


Reason 3: Also, I can Show that I am happy when I am at the Olympics and I will make good use of my time.


Reason 4: Also, I can meet my family members in London.


Reason 5: I can cheer for New Zealand


So thats why should go to London. Please let me go to London.




Tuesday 7 August 2012

The exciting morning


Dear Mum

You paid for my useful and helpful Netbook.  I will prove to you that your money is not wasted.
On our Netbook launch  day I did not expect the wonderful and colourful decoration in the hall and on the trolley on the Netbooks. The movie I did not expect the most.  Also I didn't expect the Netbooks in boxes. The most I enjoyed was turning the Netbooks on. It will help me by letting me go on the internet.The balloons were expected because I helped put them up. That is why I want to say thank you mum.

Your son

Tamim